Re: [Anima] review comments draft-ietf-anima-stable-connectivity-03-rev Med.doc

Toerless Eckert <tte@cs.fau.de> Thu, 27 July 2017 18:52 UTC

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Date: Thu, 27 Jul 2017 20:51:50 +0200
From: Toerless Eckert <tte@cs.fau.de>
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Subject: Re: [Anima] review comments draft-ietf-anima-stable-connectivity-03-rev Med.doc
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Thanks a lot, Mohamed for the thorough review!

I pushed -04 of the draft out with your changes incorporated. IMHO it's all great textual improvements but no logical changes, aka: should be fine for prior reviewers.

Diff:

http://tools.ietf.org/tools/rfcdiff/rfcdiff.pyht?url1=https://tools.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-anima-stable-connectivity-03.txt&url2=https://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-anima-stable-connectivity-04.txt

Your original review doc:

https://github.com/anima-wg/autonomic-control-plane/blob/master/draft-ietf-anima-stable-connectivity/03-review-mohamed.boucadair.doc

My reply comments:

https://github.com/anima-wg/autonomic-control-plane/blob/master/draft-ietf-anima-stable-connectivity/03-review-mohamed.boucadair-reply.txt

While incorporating your review, i also figured that it would be good if ACP connect
would allow auto-configuration of NMS hosts, so i added a paragraph to mandate RFC4191,
but i didn't rev ACP draft just for that yet, so here's just diff on github for that;

http://tools.ietf.org/tools/rfcdiff/rfcdiff.pyht?url1=https://tools.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-08.txt&url2=https://raw.githubusercontent.com/anima-wg/autonomic-control-plane/af74117400b6a5a7fca1acf2ab910d64a580a5c9/draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane/draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane.txt

Cheers
    Toerless

On Mon, Jul 24, 2017 at 05:49:07AM +0000, mohamed.boucadair@orange.com wrote:
> Dear Toreless, 
> 
> I'm resending this document as I didn't receive an ACK from your side. 
> 
> Please consider those as part of the WGLC comments. 
> 
> Cheers,
> Med
> 
> > -----Message d'origine-----
> > De : BOUCADAIR Mohamed IMT/OLN
> > Envoyé : vendredi 7 juillet 2017 14:58
> > À : 'tte+ietf@cs.fau.de'
> > Objet : Envoi d?un message : draft-ietf-anima-stable-connectivity-03-rev
> > Med.doc
> > 
> > Dear Toreless,
> > 
> > Please find some comments about this draft.
> > 
> > Cheers,
> > Med