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Subject: [Anima] Fwd: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-anima-brski-ae-12.txt
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Dear all, I've just submitted draft version 12 of BRSKI-AE <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-anima-brski-ae/12/>addressing the nits reported in the recent Gen-ART review and providing some fixups on the changes of version 11. Here is the summary of changes for the previous two versions: • In response to AD review by Mahesh Jethanandani: o rearrange few paragraphs in abstract, introduction, and appendix oreplace most occurrences of 'Note:' by 'Note that' or the like oconvert some words to normative language, e.g., replacing 'may' by 'MAY’ ochange re-use of TLS channel by enrollment protectionfrom RECOMMENDED to MANDATORY ofix ambiguities and hard-to-read sentences by re-phrasing them omake wording more consistent, fix (mostly grammar) nits •Fix nits spotted in Gen-ART review by Meral Shirazipour At IETF 120, the status of the draft (currently: Waiting for AD Go-Ahead) is going go be presented by Steffen. Best, David On 05.07.24 18:23, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote: > A new version of Internet-Draft draft-ietf-anima-brski-ae-12.txt has been > successfully submitted by David von Oheimb and posted to the > IETF repository. > > Name: draft-ietf-anima-brski-ae > Revision: 12 > Title: BRSKI-AE: Alternative Enrollment Protocols in BRSKI > Date: 2024-07-05 > Group: anima > Pages: 41 > URL:https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-anima-brski-ae-12.txt > Status:https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-anima-brski-ae/ > HTMLized:https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-anima-brski-ae > Diff:https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-anima-brski-ae-12 > > Abstract: > > This document defines an enhancement of Bootstrapping Remote Secure > Key Infrastructure (BRSKI, RFC 8995). It supports alternative > certificate enrollment protocols, such as CMP, that use authenticated > self-contained signed objects for certification messages. > > About This Document > > This note is to be removed before publishing as an RFC. > > Status information for this document may be found at > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-anima-brski-ae/. > > Source for this draft and an issue tracker can be found at > https://github.com/anima-wg/anima-brski-ae. > > > > The IETF Secretariat > >
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