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no-senders; approved; emergency; loop; banned-address; member-moderation; header-match-anima.ietf.org-0; nonmember-moderation; administrivia; implicit-dest; max-recipients; max-size; news-moderation; no-subject; digests; suspicious-header X-Mailman-Version: 3.3.9rc4 Precedence: list Subject: =?utf-8?q?=5BAnima=5D_Fwd=3A_New_Version_Notification_for_draft-ietf-anima-b?= =?utf-8?q?rski-ae-12=2Etxt?= List-Id: Autonomic Networking Integrated Model and Approach Archived-At: List-Archive: List-Help: List-Owner: List-Post: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: --------------77KEzBtTW0m0Q64biIUHY6IH Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8; format=flowed Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit Dear all, I've just submitted draft version 12 of BRSKI-AE addressing the nits reported in the recent Gen-ART review and providing some fixups on the changes of version 11. Here is the summary of changes for the previous two versions: • In response to AD review by Mahesh Jethanandani: o rearrange few paragraphs in abstract, introduction, and appendix oreplace most occurrences of 'Note:' by 'Note that' or the like oconvert some words to normative language, e.g., replacing 'may' by 'MAY’ ochange re-use of TLS channel by enrollment protectionfrom RECOMMENDED to MANDATORY ofix ambiguities and hard-to-read sentences by re-phrasing them omake wording more consistent, fix (mostly grammar) nits •Fix nits spotted in Gen-ART review by Meral Shirazipour At IETF 120, the status of the draft (currently: Waiting for AD Go-Ahead) is going go be presented by Steffen. Best,     David On 05.07.24 18:23, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote: > A new version of Internet-Draft draft-ietf-anima-brski-ae-12.txt has been > successfully submitted by David von Oheimb and posted to the > IETF repository. > > Name: draft-ietf-anima-brski-ae > Revision: 12 > Title: BRSKI-AE: Alternative Enrollment Protocols in BRSKI > Date: 2024-07-05 > Group: anima > Pages: 41 > URL:https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-anima-brski-ae-12.txt > Status:https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-anima-brski-ae/ > HTMLized:https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-anima-brski-ae > Diff:https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-anima-brski-ae-12 > > Abstract: > > This document defines an enhancement of Bootstrapping Remote Secure > Key Infrastructure (BRSKI, RFC 8995). It supports alternative > certificate enrollment protocols, such as CMP, that use authenticated > self-contained signed objects for certification messages. > > About This Document > > This note is to be removed before publishing as an RFC. > > Status information for this document may be found at > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-anima-brski-ae/. > > Source for this draft and an issue tracker can be found at > https://github.com/anima-wg/anima-brski-ae. > > > > The IETF Secretariat > > --------------77KEzBtTW0m0Q64biIUHY6IH Content-Type: text/html; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit

Dear all,

I've just submitted draft version 12 of BRSKI-AE
addressing the nits reported in the recent Gen-ART review
and providing some fixups on the changes of version 11.

Here is the summary of changes for the previous two versions:

• In response to AD review by Mahesh Jethanandani:
o rearrange few paragraphs in abstract, introduction, and appendix
o replace most occurrences of 'Note:' by 'Note that' or the like
o convert some words to normative language, e.g., replacing 'may' by 'MAY’
o change re-use of TLS channel by enrollment protection from RECOMMENDED to MANDATORY
o fix ambiguities and hard-to-read sentences by re-phrasing them
o make wording more consistent, fix (mostly grammar) nits
• Fix nits spotted in Gen-ART review by Meral Shirazipour

At IETF 120, the status of the draft (currently: Waiting for AD Go-Ahead) is going go be presented by Steffen.

Best,

    David


On 05.07.24 18:23, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
A new version of Internet-Draft draft-ietf-anima-brski-ae-12.txt has been
successfully submitted by David von Oheimb and posted to the
IETF repository.

Name:     draft-ietf-anima-brski-ae
Revision: 12
Title:    BRSKI-AE: Alternative Enrollment Protocols in BRSKI
Date:     2024-07-05
Group:    anima
Pages:    41
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Abstract:

   This document defines an enhancement of Bootstrapping Remote Secure
   Key Infrastructure (BRSKI, RFC 8995).  It supports alternative
   certificate enrollment protocols, such as CMP, that use authenticated
   self-contained signed objects for certification messages.

About This Document

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