[Anima] appendix D removed!

Michael Richardson <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca> Tue, 03 October 2017 19:09 UTC

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Max, as agreed in today's call, I went through the todo of edits, and did them:

   Proxy:
        * Action: insert section betweeen 2.4 and 2.5 that indicates the
               proxy is part of the architecture

DONE: new text at
      https://github.com/anima-wg/anima-bootstrap/blob/master/dtbootstrap-anima-keyinfra.txt#L851

     *                  if you are going to implement a proxy then you
            should support a circuit proxy so that it works with all
            registrars

     *      add a high level section between s5 and s6 that
            details proxy discussion

DONE:
  https://github.com/anima-wg/anima-bootstrap/blob/master/dtbootstrap-anima-keyinfra.txt#L2084

     *
          * Action: update figure 1 from "dead branch"

DONE:
https://github.com/anima-wg/anima-bootstrap/blob/master/component-diagram.txt

     * Action: move 4.1.2 to new section.

DONE:
moved it.

     * Moving on in appendix D:
          * [30]https://github.com/anima-wg/anima-bootstrap/blob/master/dtboots
                 trap-anima-keyinfra.txt#L3341
                      *
                           * Maybe add section 2.0 about MASA to section 2,
                             protocol overview.

DONE:
the MASA part was up at L851 above.

     * Move section D.1.4 to section 1.3, with reference to ACP.

DONE:
added new subsection to section 1.

Ripped appendix D.

Remaining TODO:
          update the JRC discovery with the M_FLOOD method.


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