[Anima] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-anima-brski-ae-11

Meral Shirazipour via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Wed, 19 June 2024 06:09 UTC

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Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review result: Ready with Nits

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.

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Document: draft-ietf-anima-brski-ae-11
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2024-06-18
IETF LC End Date: 2024-06-19
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
[Page 7], typo
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