Re: [Anima] Benjamin Kaduk's Discuss on draft-ietf-anima-bootstrapping-keyinfra-22: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

Adam Roach <> Tue, 16 July 2019 22:48 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Anima] Benjamin Kaduk's Discuss on draft-ietf-anima-bootstrapping-keyinfra-22: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
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On 7/16/19 5:14 PM, Michael Richardson wrote:
> Adam Roach:
> ...
> This is an rfcdiff from the already-wrapped JSON to the proposed -23 that
> includes all the changes from the various DISCUSSes up to now:

As a quick note -- the diff above does not address the "discuss" part of 
my second discuss point: the document remains ambiguous regarding *how* 
the URL is to be returned. The lengthy parenthetical references added to 
the corresponding paragraph aren't sufficient to positively indicate 
that the URL appears in a "Location" header: this needs to be stated 
explicitly rather than implied by a section reference.