[Anima] draft-ietf-anima-bootstrapping-keyinfra

tom petch <daedulus@btconnect.com> Tue, 14 April 2020 10:03 UTC

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From: tom petch <daedulus@btconnect.com>
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Subject: [Anima] draft-ietf-anima-bootstrapping-keyinfra
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The IESG approval of this I-D caused me to look again at it:-(

I note that part of the formal specification is in CDDL and while other 
DDL - ASN.1, SMI, YANG - are bracketed with CODE BEGINS CODE ENDS - the 
CDDL  is not. I suspect that it should be - perhaps a note to the RFC 
Editor is called for.

In the Security Considerations I encounter MTIM which I suspect should 
be MITM (and which needs expanding on first use in s.5).

In the YANG module, I see two references in square brackets which 
suggests that they are in XML/HTML and not plain text whereas there is a 
requirement for YANG modules to be in plain text so that they can be 
extracted from the RFC.

Tom Petch


On 03/01/2020 18:34, Michael Richardson wrote:
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