Re: [Anima] (shepherd) review of draft-carpenter-anima-asa-guidelines-09

Brian E Carpenter <> Sat, 07 November 2020 00:39 UTC

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To: Toerless Eckert <>, Anima WG <>
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Thanks Toerless. Those are good comments.

For practical reasons, I'd rather issue a WG -00 draft ASAP with no substantive changes, and then process your comments for the -01 version. I can do the first step as soon as the I-D repository opens again. The XML file is ready on my disk.


On 06-Nov-20 17:50, Toerless Eckert wrote:
> Dear draft authors:
> Thanks for this work. Please find below an initial shepherd review of the
> draft. I have no technical concerns with the document bcause i think this is
> a very explorative area where this document is a great first stake in the ground.
> All comments/suggestions therefore are either
> a) text quality
> b) Marketing (text could be more positive about how easy this is and at
>    best equally complex as other pre-existing and less autonomic solutions)
> Cheers
>     Toerless