[apps-discuss] Apps Dir review for: draft-daboo-webdav-sync-06

Salvatore Loreto <salvatore.loreto@ericsson.com> Sun, 18 December 2011 19:34 UTC

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I have been selected as the Applications Area Directorate reviewer for 
this draft
(for background on appsdir, please see 

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments 
you may receive.
Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before 
posting a new version of the draft.

Document: draft-daboo-webdav-sync-06

Title: Collection Synchronization for WebDAV
Reviewer: Salvatore Loreto
Review Date: 2011-12-18
IESG Telechat Date: 2012-01-05

This draft is almost ready for publication as an Informational RFC but 
has a few issues that should be fixed before publication.

Major Issues:

Minor Issues:


     expand the WebDAV acronym on the first use.

3.2 DAV:sync-collection Report


       (DAV:valid-sync-token): The DAV:sync-token element value MUST be a
       valid token previously returned by the server.

please clarify that the token is collection specific, so it needs to be 
from the same collection.

6.3 DAV:multistatus XML Element

	<!ELEMENT multistatus (DAV:response*, DAV:responsedescription?,

remove the DAV: prefix.



- draft-ietf-vcarddav-carddav has been published as RFC 6352
- the nits tools also report the following error:
           Downref: Normative reference to an Experimental RFC: RFC 5842

best regards
Salvatore Loreto