Re: [apps-discuss] Appsdir review of draft-reschke-http-status-308-05

[Eran Hammer <[e-mail]>]

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Julian Reschke [mailto:[e-mail]]
> Sent: Wednesday, February 29, 2012 11:41 AM
> To: Eran Hammer
> Cc: [e-mail]; Peter Saint-Andre ([e-mail])
> [e-mail]
> Subject: Re: Appsdir review of draft-reschke-http-status-308-05
> 
> On 2012-02-29 20:12, Eran Hammer wrote:
> > I have been selected as the Applications Area Directorate reviewer for this
> draft (for background on appsdir, please see
> http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/app/trac/wiki/ApplicationsAreaDirectorate)
> >
> > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
> you may receive. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or
> AD before posting a new version of the draft.
> >
> > Document: draft-reschke-http-status-308-05
> >
> > Title: The Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP) Status Code 308
> > (Permanent Redirect)
> >
> > Reviewer: Eran Hammer
> >
> > Review Date: 2012-02-29
> >
> > IETF Last Call Date: 2012-03-16
> >
> > Summary: This draft is ready for publication as Experimental
> >
> > Major Issues:
> >
> > None.
> >
> > Minor Issues:
> >
> > None.
> >
> > Nits:
> 
> Thanks!
> 
> > Section 3: I was expecting the section to read as if it was part of
> > draft-ietf-httpbis-p2-semantics (e.g. the "missing" section 7.3.9).
> > While all the technical information can be found in the document, it
> > might be easier for readers to have section 3 written the same way
> > 7.3.9 is written in draft-ietf-httpbis-p2-semantics
> 
> That's because we just did cleanup work in Part 2, and that draft hasn't been
> published yet. See <http://greenbytes.de/tech/webdav/draft-ietf-httpbis-
> p2-semantics-latest.html#status.307>.

Looks good. Thanks.

EH

> > Section 4: Add informative reference to current HTML specification.
> 
> OK, I can do that.
> 
> Best regards, Julian