Return-Path: X-Original-To: apps-discuss@ietfa.amsl.com Delivered-To: apps-discuss@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 0773121F8EFD; Mon, 6 May 2013 01:04:50 -0700 (PDT) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com X-Spam-Flag: NO X-Spam-Score: -0.719 X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-0.719 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-2.599, HELO_EQ_IT=0.635, HOST_EQ_IT=1.245] Received: from mail.ietf.org ([12.22.58.30]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id GQZMChzcCqd4; Mon, 6 May 2013 01:04:46 -0700 (PDT) Received: from cyrus.dir.garr.it (cyrus.dir.garr.it [193.206.158.29]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id D117D21F8EFC; Mon, 6 May 2013 01:04:45 -0700 (PDT) Received: internal info suppressed Date: Mon, 6 May 2013 10:04:41 +0200 (CEST) From: Claudio Allocchio X-X-Sender: claudio@mac-allocchio3.elettra.trieste.it To: draft-ietf-dhc-triggered-reconfigure.all@tools.ietf.org, apps-discuss@ietf.org, iesg@ietf.org Message-ID: User-Agent: Alpine 2.02 (OSX 1266 2009-07-14) MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: MULTIPART/MIXED; BOUNDARY="0-889524015-1367827483=:12855" DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/simple; d=garr.it; s=cyrus; t=1367827484; bh=NdvjyJwGJNm3E98mGYnIMaUwBroTQZ1atX+orpd63HA=; h=Date:From:To:Subject; b=UqOCF9r0PxVdwPprNorlrOwnyKD2RNaFhFZvJHfLMQj9rOQh0QE1Ogr+M+16PvcdT CgjZLWkJ66EqYNVZHIhgL12KLYHzNHaqcisYTg0ZXX5ka4c569gUQnW7iTOM09oSMy KaaTcNZwpDlnj84HdirSqAFKbsxaMJvs9t+kqg6U= Subject: [apps-discuss] APPSDIR review of draft-ietf-dhc-triggered-reconfigure-05 X-BeenThere: apps-discuss@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.12 Precedence: list List-Id: General discussion of application-layer protocols List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 06 May 2013 08:04:50 -0000 This message is in MIME format. The first part should be readable text, while the remaining parts are likely unreadable without MIME-aware tools. --0-889524015-1367827483=:12855 Content-Type: TEXT/PLAIN; format=flowed; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8BIT Hello all, I have been selected as the Applications Area Directorate reviewer for this draft (for background on appsdir, please see ​http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/app/trac/wiki/ApplicationsAreaDirectorate ). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-dhc-triggered-reconfigure-05 Title: Reconfigure Triggered by DHCPv6 Relay Agents Reviewer: Claudio Allocchio Review Date: May 06th 2013 IETF Last Call Date: April 4th 2013 IESG Telechat Date: ? Summary: the draft clearly specify the problem and the solution. Cross references to the documents it updates are also clear and complete. I think the document is ready for publication. I just have a very monor issu/suggestion, but the document could go "as is" for approval. Major Issues: none. Minor Issues: 7. Rate Limiting Considerations ... what about just mentioning that this rete limiting is also useful to avoid DoS attacks, too? It is not really an issue, maybe it's so obvious that you do not need to mention it, but... Nits: it's really a matter of taste... but I would rename chapter 3 as 3. Problem Statement ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Claudio Allocchio G A R R Claudio.Allocchio@garr.it Senior Technical Officer tel: +39 040 3758523 Italian Academic and G=Claudio; S=Allocchio; fax: +39 040 3758565 Research Network P=garr; A=garr; C=it; PGP Key: http://www.cert.garr.it/PGP/keys.php3#ca --0-889524015-1367827483=:12855--