[apps-discuss] Apps-Review Team Review: draft-ietf-enum-iax-10

[Joseph Yee <[e-mail]>]

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Greeting,

I have been selected as the Applications Area Review Team reviewer for this draft (for background on apps-review, please see http://www.apps.ietf.org/content/applications-area-review-team).

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft.

Document: draft-ietf-enum-iax-10
Title: IANA Registration for Enumservice 'iax'
Reviewer: Joseph Yee
Review Date: April 18, 2011

Summary:
This draft is almost ready for publication as an Informational RFC but has a few nits that should be fixed before publication.


Major Issues:
   None

Minor Issues:
   None

Nits:
   (1)
   In Section 5, IANA Considerations, words suggested to make registration type more specific

   Original
   This document requests registration of the 'iax' Enumservice
   according....

   Suggestion
   This document requests registration of the Enumservice
   Type 'iax' according.....

   (2)
   In Section 5, IANA Considerations, specifications reference should include RFC6116

   Original
   according to the guidelines and specifications in [RFC6117] 
   and the definitions in Section 2 in this document.

   Suggestion
   according to the guidelines and specifications in [RFC6117], 
   [RFC6116] and the definitions in Section 2 in this document.


Best Regards,
Joseph Yee