Re: [apps-discuss] Appsdir review of draft-reschke-http-status-308-05

[Julian Reschke <[e-mail]>]

On 2012-02-29 20:12, Eran Hammer wrote:
> I have been selected as the Applications Area Directorate reviewer for this draft (for background on appsdir, please see http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/app/trac/wiki/ApplicationsAreaDirectorate)
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> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft.
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> Document: draft-reschke-http-status-308-05
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> Title: The Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP) Status Code 308 (Permanent Redirect)
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> Reviewer: Eran Hammer
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> Review Date: 2012-02-29
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> IETF Last Call Date: 2012-03-16
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> Summary: This draft is ready for publication as Experimental
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> Major Issues:
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> None.
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> Minor Issues:
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> None.
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> Nits:

Thanks!

> Section 3: I was expecting the section to read as if it was part of draft-ietf-httpbis-p2-semantics (e.g. the "missing" section 7.3.9). While all the technical information can be found in the document, it might be easier for readers to have section 3 written the same way 7.3.9 is written in draft-ietf-httpbis-p2-semantics

That's because we just did cleanup work in Part 2, and that draft hasn't 
been published yet. See 
<http://greenbytes.de/tech/webdav/draft-ietf-httpbis-p2-semantics-latest.html#status.307>.

> Section 4: Add informative reference to current HTML specification.

OK, I can do that.

Best regards, Julian