[apps-discuss] Apps-team review of draft-ietf-dnsop-as112-ops-06

S Moonesamy <sm+ietf@elandsys.com> Sat, 16 April 2011 17:20 UTC

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Subject: [apps-discuss] Apps-team review of draft-ietf-dnsop-as112-ops-06
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I have been selected as the Applications Area Review Team reviewer 
for this draft (for background on apps-review, please see 
http://www.apps.ietf.org/content/applications-area-review-team).

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments 
you may receive. Please wait for direction from your document 
shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft.

Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-default-local-zones-15
Reviewer: S. Moonesamy
Review Date: April 16, 2011
IETF Last Call Date: 2011-04-11
IESG Telechat Date: 2011-04-28

Summary:

This draft is ready for publication as an informational RFC.

The draft describes the steps required to install a new AS112 node, 
and offers advice relating to such a node's operation.

Major Issues:

None

Minor Issues:

None

Nits:

In Section 1:


   "The AS112 project aims to provide a distributed sink for such queries
    in order to reduce the load on the root and IN-ADDR.ARPA authoritative
    servers"

Does it reduce load on the root or on IN-ADDR.ARPA authoritative servers only?

In Section 3.4:

  "The examples in this document are based on Quagga."

I suggest adding "and Linux" as the example uses "eth0".

Regards,
S. Moonesamy