[apps-discuss] APPSDIR review of draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-decodability-09

Enrico Marocco <enrico.marocco@telecomitalia.it> Tue, 19 March 2013 15:47 UTC

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I have been selected as the Applications Area Directorate reviewer for
this draft (for background on appsdir, please see
http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/app/trac/wiki/ApplicationsAreaDirectorate ).

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd
or AD before posting a new version of the draft.

Document: draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-decodability-09
Title: RTP Control Protocol (RTCP) Extended Report (XR) Block for MPEG2
Transport Stream (TS) Program Specific Information (PSI) Independent
Decodability Statistics Metrics reporting
Reviewer: Enrico Marocco
Review Date: 2013-03-19
IETF Last Call Date: Unknown
IESG Telechat Date: Unknown

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Standards Track RFC.
From an APPS point of view there no issues with this document, but a
bunch of nits the RFC Editor would have spotted anyway.


General note: ETSI TR 101 290 is mentioned in several places throughout
the document. It should be replaced with the actual reference ([ETSI]).

Abstract: The last sentence is really hard to read. I'm not sure I
entirely understand what it means, so I'll let it up to the authors to
propose a better wording.

S. 3, "Reserved" definition: s/senders ignored/senders and ignored/