[apps-discuss] APPSDIR review of draft-ohye-canonical-link-relation-04

Yoshiro YONEYA <yoshiro.yoneya@jprs.co.jp> Thu, 15 December 2011 09:20 UTC

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I have been selected as the Applications Area Directorate reviewer for
this draft (for background on appsdir, please see

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.  Please wait for direction from your document shepherd
or AD before posting a new version of the draft.

Document: draft-ohye-canonical-link-relation-04
Title: The Canonical Link Relation
Reviewer: Yoshiro Yoneya
Review Date: 2011-12-15
IETF Last Call Date: 2011-12-29
IESG Telechat Date: 2012-01-05


This draft is almost ready for publication as an Informational RFC but
has a few issues that should be fixed before publication.

Major Issues:

- Section 8: Internationalisation Considerations

  Refering whole [RFC3986] is too broad. As noted in IESG writeups, this
  section should refer to section 8 of [RFC5988].

Minor Issues:

- Section3: The Canonical Link Relation

  Using similar terms such as canonical URI, target URI, and canonical
  target are confusing.  Including reference or definition of these
  terms is preferrable.


- Abstract

  "canonical," -> "canonical",


Yoshiro YONEYA <yoshiro.yoneya@jprs.co.jp>