Re: [apps-discuss] APPSDIR review of draft-ietf-dnsext-rfc2617bis-edns0-08

[Joseph Yee <[e-mail]>]

forgot to remove version number in the email
-Joseph

On 2012-02-29, at 4:30 PM, Joseph Yee wrote:

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> I have been selected as the Applications Area Directorate reviewer for this draft (for background on appsdir, please see  http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/app/trac/wiki/ApplicationsAreaDirectorate)
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> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft.
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> Document: draft-ietf-dnsext-rfc2671bis-edns0-08
> Title: Extension Mechanisms for DNS (EDNS0)
> Reviewer: Joseph Yee
> Review Date: Feb 29, 2012
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> Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as a Proposed Standard Standard RFC but has a few issues that should be fixed before publication
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> Major Issues: 
> 	none
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> Minor Issues: 
> 	(1) 
> 	Although no negative impact from the lack of mention in the draft, Binary Label in IANA should change its status to obsolete (or historic or just remove the entry?).  
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> 	(2) 
> 	The paragraph in section 10 (8th paragraph from page 13) is hard to read.  I'm debated whether to put this into minor or nits.  I don't see negative impact keeping it as is, but recommend to improve it if possible.
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> Nits: 
> 	(1)
> 	typo at section 10, 6th paragraph (or 3rd paragraph from page 13)
> 	original
> 	"IANA is advised to udpates reference...."
> 	s/udpates/updates/
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