Re: [apps-discuss] [appsdir] Feedback on draft-moonesamy-rfc2369bis-01 and draft-moonesamy-rfc2919bis-01

S Moonesamy <sm+ietf@elandsys.com> Wed, 18 January 2012 17:21 UTC

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Hello,

I plan to submit draft-moonesamy-rfc2369bis-02 today.  The list of 
changes from -01 are:

    o  Added ABNF and reference to RFC 5234
    o  Removed text about postmaster in List-Owner Section
    o  Removed User Interface guidelines from Appendix B
    o  Removed SHOULD include a "mailto" based command in Section 3
    o  Modified the text to first paragraph of Section 3.1

Thanks to Mykyta Yevstifeye, Murray S. Kucherawy and John Levine for 
feedback.  I'll summarize the comments.  As usual, if I misunderstood 
anything you said, please email me.

I added "List-Sequence" in the Abstract Section as Mykyta suggested 
[1] and added the IANA registration.  I included the ABNF he 
suggested and some editorial changes (mailto).

Murray suggested [2] including ABNF.  As he commented on the language 
at the top of 3.1 sounding vaguely like a minimum compliance 
statement, I modified the text.  The suggestion to use "postmaster" 
in Section 3.5 of draft-moonesamy-rfc2369bis-01 has been 
removed.  The Client Implementation appendix has been removed as John 
Levine also commented on not providing UI guidance.  I have not added 
a reference to draft-gregorio-uritemplate (values expanded by MUA).

John Levine suggested [3] not providing MUA user interface design 
advice.  Appendix B has been removed.  I removed the text that 
sounded like the "the constant harping to use mailto:".  I kept 
Section 4 about Nested lists.

Murray also mentioned having some text in the Security Considerations 
Section to recommend that MUAs should not generate the header 
fields.  I didn't make that change as there is already a 
recommendation in the second paragraph of Section 3.

Regards,
S. Moonesamy

1. http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/apps-discuss/current/msg04032.html
2. http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/apps-discuss/current/msg04039.html
3. http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/appsdir/current/msg00687.html