Re: [apps-discuss] AppsDir review of draft-ietf-6man-stable-privacy-addresses-06

Fernando Gont <fgont@si6networks.com> Mon, 22 April 2013 16:17 UTC

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Subject: Re: [apps-discuss] AppsDir review of draft-ietf-6man-stable-privacy-addresses-06
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Hi, He,

On 04/22/2013 01:58 AM, He Xuan wrote:
> Summary: This draft is nearly ready for publication as an Standards Track
> RFC.
> 
> Major Issues: none.
> 
> Minor:
> 
> In section 1, section 2 and section 6, it would be better to list detailed
> quotation section number such as "see Appendix A.1" or "see Appendix A.2",
> since there is a complex appendix. 

Will do.



> Nits:
> 
> In Appendix, 1st paragraph: (non-exaustive) should be a typo.

Fixed.

Thanks!

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