Re: [apps-discuss] Appsdir review of XML schema in https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-clue-data-model-schema-14

ht@inf.ed.ac.uk (Henry S. Thompson) Wed, 01 June 2016 02:14 UTC

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From: ht@inf.ed.ac.uk (Henry S. Thompson)
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Subject: Re: [apps-discuss] Appsdir review of XML schema in https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-clue-data-model-schema-14
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Simon Pietro Romano writes:

> let us thank you for your thorough review! Please find in-line
> (preceded by [spromano]) our answers to your comments.

You're welcome.  With the smalls changes you report in the rest of your
message, as far as my review is concerned you are good to go.

>> ...
>> Nits:
>> 
>> Section 18, the XML example has a (copy-paste?) error, which renders
>> that example invalid against the schema.  The line
>> 
>>             <encGroupIDREF>EG0</encGroupIDREF>
>> 
>> appears twice inside mediaCapture VC7, once on line 204 and once on line
>> 237.  The first occurrence should be deleted.
>
> [spromano] You are referring to VC4, right? If so, the issue has been
> solved. Good catch!

Yes, don't know where the VC7 came from.

ht
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