Re: [apps-discuss] APPSDIR review of draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-decodability-09
"Huangyihong (Rachel)" <rachel.huang@huawei.com> Wed, 20 March 2013 02:05 UTC
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From: "Huangyihong (Rachel)" <rachel.huang@huawei.com>
To: Enrico Marocco <enrico.marocco@telecomitalia.it>, "apps-discuss@ietf.org" <apps-discuss@ietf.org>, "??tools.ietf.org" <??tools.ietf.org@huawei.com>
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Subject: Re: [apps-discuss] APPSDIR review of draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-decodability-09
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Dear Enrico, Thanks for your review. Please see my replies inline. Best Regards! Rachel -----Original Message----- From: Enrico Marocco [mailto:enrico.marocco@telecomitalia.it] Sent: Tuesday, March 19, 2013 11:48 PM To: apps-discuss@ietf.org; ??tools.ietf.org Subject: APPSDIR review of draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-decodability-09 I have been selected as the Applications Area Directorate reviewer for this draft (for background on appsdir, please see http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/app/trac/wiki/ApplicationsAreaDirectorate ). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-decodability-09 Title: RTP Control Protocol (RTCP) Extended Report (XR) Block for MPEG2 Transport Stream (TS) Program Specific Information (PSI) Independent Decodability Statistics Metrics reporting Reviewer: Enrico Marocco Review Date: 2013-03-19 IETF Last Call Date: Unknown IESG Telechat Date: Unknown Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Standards Track RFC. From an APPS point of view there no issues with this document, but a bunch of nits the RFC Editor would have spotted anyway. Nits: General note: ETSI TR 101 290 is mentioned in several places throughout the document. It should be replaced with the actual reference ([ETSI]). [Rachel]: Okay. Abstract: The last sentence is really hard to read. I'm not sure I entirely understand what it means, so I'll let it up to the authors to propose a better wording. [Rachel]: How about changing to the following sentence? " This document defines an RTP Control Protocol (RTCP) Extended Report (XR) Block that allows the reporting of MPEG2 TS Program Specific Information (PSI) Independent decodability statistics metrics for applications using transmissions of MPEG2 TS over RTP. " S. 3, "Reserved" definition: s/senders ignored/senders and ignored/ [Rachel]: Okay.
- [apps-discuss] APPSDIR review of draft-ietf-xrblo… Enrico Marocco
- Re: [apps-discuss] APPSDIR review of draft-ietf-x… Huangyihong (Rachel)
- Re: [apps-discuss] APPSDIR review of draft-ietf-x… Qin Wu
- Re: [apps-discuss] APPSDIR review of draft-ietf-x… Qin Wu