[apps-discuss] AppsDir review of draft-schaad-pkix-rfc2875-bis-07
Tobias Gondrom <tobias.gondrom@gondrom.org> Tue, 19 March 2013 02:30 UTC
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I have been selected as the Applications Area Directorate reviewer for this draft (for background on appsdir, please see http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/app/trac/wiki/ApplicationsAreaDirectorate ). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-schaad-pkix-rfc2875-bis-07 Title: Constrained Application Protocol (CoAP) Reviewer: Tobias Gondrom Review Date: 18.03.2013 Summary: This draft is good work and almost ready for publication as Standards Track RFC Please clean up a number of spelling errors, mostly in section 1, a few downward refs in the idnits and one minor question. Comments/Questions: - section 4.1. ASN.1 Encoding This question may be outdated, but would it be worth to mention in the section to which ASN.1 version the spec is conform? - Nits: section 1: s/Among the responsibilities of a Certificate Authority in issuing a certificates/Among the responsibilities of a Certificate Authority in issuing certificates s/ and that it verify that/ and that it verifies that s/requester of the certificate is call/requester of the certificate is called s/Two methods use the the key agreement process/Two methods use the key agreement process (there might be more...) Reference Errors: ** Downref: Normative reference to an Informational RFC: RFC 2104 ** Downref: Normative reference to an Informational RFC: RFC 2986 ** Downref: Normative reference to an Informational RFC: RFC 6234 Best regards, Tobias
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