Re: [apps-review] Reminder: Request for review: draft-ietf-dime-extended-naptr-06

[Julian Reschke <[e-mail]>]

On 19.04.2011 11:36, SM wrote:
> Hi Julian, Joseph,
> At 01:58 19-04-2011, Julian Reschke wrote:
>> I can do a fully mechanical check (ABNF, references, keywords, etc),
>> but I do not have *any* knowledge about the technical matter. I'll do
>> what I can today, but maybe somebody else can take over with the
>> remainder?
>
> Can you do the mechanical checks?

Done.

All I have is:

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Editorial:

        iana-registered-service = aaa-service / ALPHA *31ALPHANUMSYM
        aaa-service             = "aaa+ap" appln-id
        appln-id                = DIGIT *DIGIT
                                  ; Application identifier expressed as a
                                  ; decimal integer.

1) Is "aaa+ap" case-insensitive? (That's the ABNF default for string 
literals)

2) Maybe "1*DIGIT" instead of "DIGIT *DIGIT"?

        iana-registered-protocol = aaa-protocol / ALPHA *31ALPHANUMSYM
        aaa-protocol             = "diameter." aaa-transport
        aaa-transport            = "tcp" / "sctp" / "tls.tcp"

(see above re case-sensitity)
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(the ABNF and the references seem to be ok, but as I said; I really did 
only a mechanical check).

> Joseph, can you do the rest of the review? I would have done the DDDS
> part if I had the time over the next few days. If you don't have the
> time, I'll do it as it is less effort than finding another reviewer for
> the assignment.
>
> I suggest that you do a joint review if both of you accept the assignment.

Best regards, Julian