[art] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-masque-connect-ip-08
Jean Mahoney via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Wed, 15 March 2023 22:49 UTC
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Reviewer: Jean Mahoney Review result: Ready Reviewer: Jean Mahoney Review result: Ready I found the doc easy to read, and I think it's ready to go. Some terms are inconsistently capitalized (e.g., Upgrade Token, URI Template, IP Address), and these could benefit from review.
- [art] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-masqu… Jean Mahoney via Datatracker
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