Re: [art] summary of updates - draft-time-touch

Joe Touch <touch@isi.edu> Tue, 18 April 2017 15:55 UTC

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Hi, Dale,

Thanks for the catch. I'll fix that in the next update.

It's a complex document so I would not be surprised if my first attempt
to organize the information had bugs. I'm glad to fix them if you have
other suggestions.

Joe


On 4/18/2017 8:29 AM, Dale R. Worley wrote:
> Joe Touch <touch@isi.edu> writes:
>> I've completed an update that rolls in the changes below as well as a
>> few other issues raised off-list.
> I can see this as being valuable, but it seems to me that the writing
> needs to be clarified and made more exact in many places.  A typical
> example is that "civil time" appears in the Introduction and other
> places, but it isn't listed in either "Terminology" or "Time scales".
> But since the whole point of the draft is making the use of time clearer
> and more exact, this is a critical matter.
>
> Dale