[art] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-quic-bit-grease-03

Julian Reschke via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Sun, 22 May 2022 11:08 UTC

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Subject: [art] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-quic-bit-grease-03

Reviewer: Julian Reschke
Review result: Ready with Nits

(Note that I read the document with limited knowledge of the QUIC protocol
itself)

The draft looks ready to me. Found one nit: Section 5 refers to "Section 22.2
of [QUIC]", but the correct target seems to be 22.3.

[art] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-quic-… Julian Reschke via Datatracker
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