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Re: [art] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-quic-bit-grease-03

Martin Thomson <mt@lowentropy.net> Mon, 23 May 2022 00:37 UTC

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Date: Mon, 23 May 2022 10:37:15 +1000
From: Martin Thomson <mt@lowentropy.net>
To: "Julian F. Reschke" <julian.reschke@gmx.de>, art@ietf.org
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Subject: Re: [art] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-quic-bit-grease-03
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On Sun, May 22, 2022, at 21:08, Julian Reschke via Datatracker wrote:
> The draft looks ready to me. Found one nit: Section 5 refers to "Section 22.2
> of [QUIC]", but the correct target seems to be 22.3.

Thanks Julian, you are right and I've fixed the reference.

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