[art] draft-ietf-lamps-macaddress-on-05 ietf last call Artart review

[Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

Document: draft-ietf-lamps-macaddress-on
Title: Media Access Control (MAC) Addresses in X.509 Certificates
Reviewer: Murray Kucherawy
Review result: Ready with Nits

This document appears to be ready for publication.  It was straightforward to
understand, and I found no major or minor concerns from ART's perspective.

A couple of nits:

(1) "OCTET STRING" is defined in RFC 5280.  I suggest saying so in Section 2,
as that's a convention/definition used throughout.  (Or, more generally, refer
to RFC 5280 in that section as a source for some conventions used in this
document.)

(2) At the end of Section 3.3, there's a naked "SHOULD".  I suggest including a
sentence about why this advice is there and/or why it's not a MUST.

(3) In Section 3.4.2, I imagine "ALL" is in all-caps for emphasis, but this
makes it look kind of like a BCP 14 key word, and I suggest not doing that.

(4) The "SHOULD" in Section 4 could also use some "why not MUST?" sort of prose.