Re: [AVTCORE] WG last call on draft-ietf-avtcore-aria-srtp-04

Dan Wing <dwing@cisco.com> Fri, 30 August 2013 06:35 UTC

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Subject: Re: [AVTCORE] WG last call on draft-ietf-avtcore-aria-srtp-04
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On Aug 26, 2013, at 2:34 AM, Magnus Westerlund <magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com> wrote:

> WG,
> 
> This starts the WG last call on draft-ietf-avtcore-aria-srtp-04 to be
> published as proposed standard. Please provide any feedback or review
> comments by September 16. Even if you have just read it and found no
> issue, please state so.
> 
> Draft:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-avtcore-aria-srtp

The document seems to just register the IANA codepoints for Security Descriptions, DTLS-SRTP, and MIKEY.  For that reason, it probably needs to be standards track (I note that ARIA itself is informational).

Nits:  Section 5.1's title should be "Security Descriptions" or "Security Descriptions (SDES)".  Section 5.1, change "Security description" to "SDP Security Descriptions" (proper capitalization and pluralization of RFC4568's short name).

-d


> 
> In addition any comments about current or planned implementation of this
> draft are appreciated.
> 
> As a WG chair I really want some persons that really understand crypto
> algorithms and/or the key-management mechanisms used to review this and
> will solicit reviews outside of the WG also.
> 
> Cheers
> 
> Magnus Westerlund
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