Re: [AVTCORE] Comments on draft-ietf-avtcore-monarch-04

Qin Wu <bill.wu@huawei.com> Fri, 21 October 2011 06:57 UTC

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Subject: Re: [AVTCORE] Comments on draft-ietf-avtcore-monarch-04
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Hi,Ning:
your clarification looks good to me, 
the new version will reflect this change soon.
Thanks for the support, 

Regards!
-Qin
  ----- Original Message ----- 
  From: 曹宁 
  To: avt 
  Sent: Friday, October 21, 2011 2:35 PM
  Subject: [AVTCORE] Comments on draft-ietf-avtcore-monarch-04


  Hi,  
  I have read draft-ietf-avtcore-monarch-04 and believe it is ready for publication. 
  I have only one suggestion for its clarity of draft. 
  In the section 5.2, it mentions using "chunk" 
  to convey correlation information, would it better to use SDEC item to replace it? 
  Also would it better to emphasize the new SDES item is required. 
   
  Regards! 
  Ning Cao   
  ShangHai Research Institute of China Telecom Corporation Limited 


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