Re: [AVTCORE] [avtext] I-D Action: draft-ietf-avtext-lrr-05.txt

Colin Perkins <csp@csperkins.org> Mon, 08 May 2017 19:12 UTC

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Subject: Re: [AVTCORE] [avtext] I-D Action: draft-ietf-avtext-lrr-05.txt
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Looks good to me (although RTCP expands to “RTP Control Protocol” not “Real-Time Transport Control Protocol”).

Cheers,
Colin



> On 8 May 2017, at 20:07, Jonathan Lennox <jonathan@vidyo.com> wrote:
> 
> This version addresses the editorial issues pointed out by Colin and Zhenghui during WGLC. Thank you for your comments!
> 
>> On May 8, 2017, at 3:06 PM, internet-drafts@ietf.org <mailto:internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:
>> 
>> 
>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
>> This draft is a work item of the Audio/Video Transport Extensions of the IETF.
>> 
>>        Title           : The Layer Refresh Request (LRR) RTCP Feedback Message
>>        Authors         : Jonathan Lennox
>>                          Danny Hong
>>                          Justin Uberti
>>                          Stefan Holmer
>>                          Magnus Flodman
>> Filename        : draft-ietf-avtext-lrr-05.txt
>> Pages           : 14
>> Date            : 2017-05-08
>> 
>> Abstract:
>>   This memo describes the RTCP Payload-Specific Feedback Message "Layer
>>   Refresh Request" (LRR), which can be used to request a state refresh
>>   of one or more substreams of a layered media stream.  It also defines
>>   its use with several RTP payloads for scalable media formats.
>> 
>> 
>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-avtext-lrr/ <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-avtext-lrr/>
>> 
>> There are also htmlized versions available at:
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>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-avtext-lrr-05
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>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-avtext-lrr-05
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