Re: [AVTCORE] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC3711 (4514)

Karl Norrman <karl.norrman@ericsson.com> Thu, 29 October 2015 12:10 UTC

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From: Karl Norrman <karl.norrman@ericsson.com>
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Subject: Re: [AVTCORE] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC3711 (4514)
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Hello!

I agree that the figure would look better if the proposed correction is made.
On the other hand, I can't really see that the current figure could be misinterpreted by an implementer, so I consider this to be an editorial correction.

BR
Karl

> -----Original Message-----
> From: RFC Errata System [mailto:rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org]
> Sent: den 29 oktober 2015 12:40
> To: mbaugher@cisco.com; elisabetta.carrara@ericsson.com;
> mcgrew@cisco.com; Mats Näslund; Karl Norrman; ben@nostrum.com;
> alissa@cooperw.in; keith.drage@alcatel-lucent.com;
> roni.even@mail01.huawei.com
> Cc: bernhard.kirchen@lancom.de; avt@ietf.org; rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org
> Subject: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC3711 (4514)
> 
> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC3711, "The Secure
> Real-time Transport Protocol (SRTP)".
> 
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=3711&eid=4514
> 
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Editorial
> Reported by: Bernhard Kirchen <bernhard.kirchen@lancom.de>
> 
> Section: 3.1
> 
> Original Text
> -------------
> The format of an SRTP packet is illustrated in Figure 1.
> 
>    0                   1                   2                   3
>  0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1
> +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+<+
> 
> Corrected Text
> --------------
> The format of an SRTP packet is illustrated in Figure 1.
> 
>  0                   1                   2                   3
>  0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1
> +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+<+
> 
> Notes
> -----
> The bit index second decimal digit is shifted by two characters. These digits
> should align with the zeros in the second line.
> 
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> 
> --------------------------------------
> RFC3711 (draft-ietf-avt-srtp-09)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : The Secure Real-time Transport Protocol (SRTP)
> Publication Date    : March 2004
> Author(s)           : M. Baugher, D. McGrew, M. Naslund, E. Carrara, K. Norrman
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : Audio/Video Transport
> Area                : Real-time Applications and Infrastructure
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG