[AVTCORE] draft-ietf-avt-srtp-not-mandatory-13 review
John Mattsson <john.mattsson@ericsson.com> Fri, 11 October 2013 09:51 UTC
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Hi, I reviewed draft-ietf-avt-srtp-not-mandatory-13. Sorry for missing WGLC. I think it looks very good and I only have a few minor editorial comments: - Choose either: "RTP Control Protocol" or "RTP control protocol" "RTP Payload Format" or "RTP payload format" "RTP Profiles" or "RTP profiles" - [p2] "Source-specific multicast (SSM)" and "multipoint conference unit (MCU)" First letters should probably be capitalized in all or none of the abbreviations c.f. "Real-time Transport Protocol (RTP)" and "Secure RTP (SRTP)" - [p2] semicolon at the end of first bullet (telephony;), but not at the end of any other bullet. - [p2] "Any Source Multicast video (ASM) conferencing" -> "Any Source Multicast (ASM) video conferencing" - [p6] "and it's associated" -> "and its associated" - [p6] "that are can be independent" -> "are" or "can be" /John ---------------------------------------------------------------------- JOHN MATTSSON MSc Engineering Physics, MSc Business Administration and Economics Senior Researcher, Security Ericsson AB Security Research Färögatan 6 SE-164 80 Stockholm, Sweden Phone +46 10 71 43 501 SMS/MMS +46 76 11 53 501 john.mattsson@ericsson.com www.ericsson.com This Communication is Confidential. We only send and receive email on the basis of the terms set out at www.ericsson.com/email_disclaimer
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