Re: [AVTCORE] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-avtcore-cc-feedback-message-08: (with COMMENT)

Colin Perkins <csp@csperkins.org> Mon, 02 November 2020 16:39 UTC

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Subject: Re: [AVTCORE] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-avtcore-cc-feedback-message-08: (with COMMENT)
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> On 20 Sep 2020, at 03:58, Erik Kline via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
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> [[ questions ]]
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> [ section 3.1 ]
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> * If L=0, do we need text about how to treat report entries with
>  non-zero ECN and ATO fields?

That shouldn’t happen, but I added “MUST be ignored” to clarify the error case.

>  Separately, what's a good mnemonic for "L"?  My instinct was to treat it
>  as the "Loss" bit, but with the meaning the values 0 and 1 reversed that
>  doesn't actually work very well.

I renamed the field to “R” for received.

> [[ nits ]]
> 
> [ section 1 ]
> 
> * "to have generic...format" -> "to have a generic...format", perhaps

Fixed.

> [ section 3.1 ]
> 
> * "sent previous reports" -> "previous reports sent", perhaps?

"sent in previous reports”

> [ section 7 ]
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> * "a=ecn-capaable-rtp:" -> "a=ecn-capable-rtp:”

Fixed

> [ section 8 ]
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> * "ECN marking marking information" -> "ECN marking information”


Fixed


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