Re: [AVTCORE] Technical - Re: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7273 (4450)

"Ben Campbell" <ben@nostrum.com> Wed, 13 April 2016 21:17 UTC

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I made the edits, but have not yet verified it. Please double check that 
the edits are correct, then I will verify.

Thanks!

Ben.

On 4 Apr 2016, at 13:27, Magnus Westerlund wrote:

> Ben,
>
> Can you please update the Errata with the below original and edited 
> text. This has been available on the list for quite some time so I 
> suggest that you verify it after editing it.
>
>
> Section 4.8:
>
> Original Text
> -------------
>    ; PTP domain allowed characters: 0x21-0x7E (IEEE 1588-2002)
>    ptp-domain-name = "domain-name=" 1*16ptp-domain-char
>    ptp-domain-char = %x21-7E
>
>    ; PTP domain allowed number range: 0-127 (IEEE 1588-2008)
>    ptp-domain-nmbr = "domain-nmbr=" ptp-domain-dgts
>    ptp-domain-dgts = ptp-domain-n1 / ptp-domain-n2 / ptp-domain-n3
>    ptp-domain-n1   = DIGIT             ; 0-9
>    ptp-domain-n2   = POS-DIGIT DIGIT   ; 10-99
>    ptp-domain-n3   = ("10"/"11") DIGIT ; 100-119
>                    / "12" %x30-37      ; 120-127
>
> Corrected Text
> --------------
>    ; PTP domain allowed characters: 0x21-0x7E (IEEE 1588-2002)
>    ptp-domain-name = 1*16ptp-domain-char
>    ptp-domain-char = %x21-7E
>
>    ; PTP domain allowed number range: 0-127 (IEEE 1588-2008)
>    ptp-domain-nmbr = ptp-domain-dgts
>    ptp-domain-dgts = ptp-domain-n1 / ptp-domain-n2 / ptp-domain-n3
>    ptp-domain-n1   = DIGIT             ; 0-9
>    ptp-domain-n2   = POS-DIGIT DIGIT   ; 10-99
>    ptp-domain-n3   = ("10"/"11") DIGIT ; 100-119
>                    / "12" %x30-37      ; 120-127
>
>
>
>
>
> The Note should also be updated:
>
> There is an inconsistency between ABNF in section 4.8 and examples in 
> section 5.5. Due to evidence, that current implementations are working 
> to what is shown in the examples, this is resolved by updating the 
> ABNF specification.
>
> cheers
>
> Magnus
>
>
> Den 2016-01-19 kl. 23:16, skrev Kevin Gross:
>> The authors are in agreement that the most recent proposal is the
>> desired fix and there doesn't seem to be any dissent in AVTCORE about
>> it. Can we get the errata updated to reflect this most recent 
>> proposal?
>> It is still showing my original report -
>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=7273
>>
>> Kevin Gross - AVA Networks
>>
>> On Sun, Dec 6, 2015 at 1:00 PM, Kevin Gross <kevin.gross@avanw.com
>> <mailto:kevin.gross@avanw.com>> wrote:
>>
>>     The authors and I propose the following fix for the reported RFC
>>     7273 errata. These ABNF changes bring the ABNF specification into
>>     agreement with the examples in the RFC. Current RFC 7273
>>     implementations have been based on the examples.
>>
>>     Original Text
>>     -------------
>>         ; PTP domain allowed characters: 0x21-0x7E (IEEE 1588-2002)
>>         ptp-domain-name = "domain-name=" 1*16ptp-domain-char
>>         ptp-domain-char = %x21-7E
>>
>>         ; PTP domain allowed number range: 0-127 (IEEE 1588-2008)
>>         ptp-domain-nmbr = "domain-nmbr=" ptp-domain-dgts
>>         ptp-domain-dgts = ptp-domain-n1 / ptp-domain-n2 / 
>> ptp-domain-n3
>>         ptp-domain-n1   = DIGIT             ; 0-9
>>         ptp-domain-n2   = POS-DIGIT DIGIT   ; 10-99
>>         ptp-domain-n3   = ("10"/"11") DIGIT ; 100-119
>>                         / "12" %x30-37      ; 120-127
>>
>>     Corrected Text
>>     --------------
>>         ; PTP domain allowed characters: 0x21-0x7E (IEEE 1588-2002)
>>         ptp-domain-name = 1*16ptp-domain-char
>>         ptp-domain-char = %x21-7E
>>
>>         ; PTP domain allowed number range: 0-127 (IEEE 1588-2008)
>>         ptp-domain-nmbr = ptp-domain-dgts
>>         ptp-domain-dgts = ptp-domain-n1 / ptp-domain-n2 / 
>> ptp-domain-n3
>>         ptp-domain-n1   = DIGIT             ; 0-9
>>         ptp-domain-n2   = POS-DIGIT DIGIT   ; 10-99
>>         ptp-domain-n3   = ("10"/"11") DIGIT ; 100-119
>>                         / "12" %x30-37      ; 120-127
>>
>>
>>     Kevin Gross - AVA Networks
>>
>>     On Thu, Oct 8, 2015 at 12:37 PM, Kevin Gross 
>> <kevin.gross@avanw.com
>>     <mailto:kevin.gross@avanw.com>> wrote:
>>
>>         Yes, I will take your discussion into account when proposing
>>         final ABNF changes. I wanted first to make sure there were no
>>         objection to the general proposal of fixing this by 
>> conforming
>>         ABNF to examples. Since we have seen no objections, I will
>>         proceed to prepare a revision.
>>
>>         Kevin Gross - AVA Networks
>>
>>         On Tue, Oct 6, 2015 at 3:33 AM, Magnus Westerlund
>>         <magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com
>>         <mailto:magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com>> wrote:
>>
>>             Hi Kevin,
>>
>>             Can you please review my previous email in detail:
>>            
>> https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/avt/kjoyUZh-9c4lYMM6pXQhH30TebY
>>
>>             I think you need to confirm on what changes that is 
>> really
>>             proposed here, and thus my feedback is relevant for this.
>>
>>             However, I have so far seen no one objecting to the 
>> general
>>             intention to at least make alignment with the examples?
>>
>>             Cheers
>>
>>             Magnus Westerlund
>>             (AVTCORE chair)
>>
>>
>>             --
>>
>>             Magnus Westerlund
>>
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