Re: [AVTCORE] Reminder: Re: WG last call on draft-ietf-avtcore-6222bis-01

-----Original Message-----
From: Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com>
Date: Thursday, April 11, 2013 12:26 PM
To: Magnus Westerlund <magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com>, "avt@ietf.org"
<avt@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [AVTCORE] Reminder: Re: WG last
call	on	draft-ietf-avtcore-6222bis-01

>Hi,
>Sorry for being late.
>I read the draft and in general it looks OK.

Thanks.

>Two comments:
>
>1. I think that the folowing text in section 5  "The algorithm described
>below is intended to be used for locally  generated unique identifiers.
>It
>is based on simply generating a  cryptographically pseudorandom value
>[RFC4086].  This value MUST be  at least 96 bits but MAY be longer." Is a
>bit confusing since I expected to algorithm and not a reference (the first
>sentence is from RFC6222). Maybe explain that the algorithm is in RFC4086,
>and maybe point to it.

OLD:

   The algorithm described below is intended to be used for locally
   generated unique identifiers.  It is based on simply generating a
   cryptographically pseudorandom value [RFC4086].  This value MUST be
   at least 96 bits but MAY be longer.

NEW:

   To locally produce a unique identifier, we simply generate a
   cryptographically pseudorandom value as described in [RFC4086].  This
value MUST be
   at least 96 bits but MAY be longer.

I dont think we should explain how this generation is done in this draft.

>
>2. PRNG is not expanded anywhere in the document

I will fix this.

-acbegen

>
>Roni Even
>
>
>-----Original Message-----
>From: avt-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:avt-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of
>Magnus
>Westerlund
>Sent: 28 March, 2013 12:02 PM
>To: avt@ietf.org
>Subject: [AVTCORE] Reminder: Re: WG last call on
>draft-ietf-avtcore-6222bis-01
>
>WG,
>
>So far there has be no other reviews of this document than mine.
>
>Can someone please review this document?
>
>I hereby extended the WG last call with one week until the 7th of April.
>
>Cheers
>
>Magnus
>
>On 2013-03-12 20:04, Magnus Westerlund wrote:
>> WG,
>> 
>> This is to announce the start of a WG last call on:
>> 
>> Guidelines for Choosing RTP Control Protocol (RTCP) Canonical Names
>> (CNAMEs) to be published as a proposed standard.
>> 
>> Document can be retrieved here:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-avtcore-6222bis/
>> 
>> Please provide any feedback by the 31st of March.
>> 
>> Regards
>> 
>> Magnus Westerlund
>> WG chair
>> 
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