Re: [AVTCORE] Review of draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc5764-mux-fixes-02
Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu> Tue, 26 January 2016 23:27 UTC
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Subject: Re: [AVTCORE] Review of draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc5764-mux-fixes-02
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On 1/26/16 5:08 PM, Gonzalo Salgueiro (gsalguei) wrote: > Thanks for the review, Paul. Posted an -05 addressing both your points. OK. I'm satisfied! Thanks, Paul > Cheers, > > Gonzalo > > >> On Jan 26, 2016, at 1:41 PM, Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu> wrote: >> >> On 1/26/16 3:26 PM, Marc Petit-Huguenin wrote: >> >>> After more discussions between authors, we decided to remove the section about ordering altogether. We now think that even if the proposal is not as future-proof as possible, it is good enough. >> >> This works better for me. Thanks! >> >> A few comments on -04: >> >> * Section 5 (Terminology): >> >> This is now section 5. That seems wrong. The document will read better if you make it section 2. >> >> * Section 6 (RFC5764 Updates): >> >> The new text still has some remnants of the ordering. In particular: "Then if ... Then if ... Then if ... Else if ...". >> >> I suggest changing this to "If ... If ... If ... If ...". >> >> Otherwise I'm happy. >> >> Thanks, >> Paul >> >> >> >> _______________________________________________ >> Audio/Video Transport Core Maintenance >> avt@ietf.org >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/avt > >
- [AVTCORE] Review of draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc5764-mu… Magnus Westerlund
- Re: [AVTCORE] Review of draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc576… Marc Petit-Huguenin
- Re: [AVTCORE] Review of draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc576… Paul Kyzivat
- Re: [AVTCORE] Review of draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc576… Marc Petit-Huguenin
- Re: [AVTCORE] Review of draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc576… Paul Kyzivat
- Re: [AVTCORE] Review of draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc576… Magnus Westerlund
- Re: [AVTCORE] Review of draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc576… Gonzalo Salgueiro (gsalguei)
- Re: [AVTCORE] Review of draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc576… Gonzalo Salgueiro (gsalguei)
- Re: [AVTCORE] Review of draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc576… Christer Holmberg
- Re: [AVTCORE] Review of draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc576… Marc Petit-Huguenin
- Re: [AVTCORE] Review of draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc576… Paul Kyzivat
- Re: [AVTCORE] Review of draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc576… Gonzalo Salgueiro (gsalguei)
- Re: [AVTCORE] Review of draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc576… Paul Kyzivat