Re: [AVTCORE] Review of draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc5764-mux-fixes-02

Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu> Tue, 26 January 2016 23:27 UTC

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Subject: Re: [AVTCORE] Review of draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc5764-mux-fixes-02
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On 1/26/16 5:08 PM, Gonzalo Salgueiro (gsalguei) wrote:
> Thanks for the review, Paul.  Posted an -05  addressing both your points.

OK. I'm satisfied!

	Thanks,
	Paul

> Cheers,
>
> Gonzalo
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>> On Jan 26, 2016, at 1:41 PM, Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu> wrote:
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>> On 1/26/16 3:26 PM, Marc Petit-Huguenin wrote:
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>>> After more discussions between authors, we decided to remove the section about ordering altogether.  We now think that even if the proposal is not as future-proof as possible, it is good enough.
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>> This works better for me. Thanks!
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>> A few comments on -04:
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>> * Section 5 (Terminology):
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>> This is now section 5. That seems wrong. The document will read better if you make it section 2.
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>> * Section 6 (RFC5764 Updates):
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>> The new text still has some remnants of the ordering. In particular: "Then if ... Then if ... Then if ... Else if ...".
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>> I suggest changing this to "If ... If ... If ... If ...".
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>> Otherwise I'm happy.
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>> 	Thanks,
>> 	Paul
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