Re: [AVTCORE] I-D Action: draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc7983bis-03.txt

Martin Thomson <mt@lowentropy.net> Thu, 12 May 2022 01:16 UTC

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Date: Thu, 12 May 2022 11:15:40 +1000
From: Martin Thomson <mt@lowentropy.net>
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Subject: Re: [AVTCORE] I-D Action: draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc7983bis-03.txt
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BTW, I don't know what toolchain is being used to produce this document, but the diagrams look pretty good with aasvg[1] treatment.  See https://gist.github.com/martinthomson/f80426a077cbb15c1fc6c773453bd4d0

(The draft looks basically ready, though I would lose the reference to draft-aboba-avtcore-quic-multiplexing)

[1] https://github.com/martinthomson/aasvg/

On Thu, May 12, 2022, at 09:42, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts 
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Audio/Video Transport Core Maintenance 
> WG of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : Multiplexing Scheme Updates for QUIC
>         Authors         : Bernard Aboba
>                           Gonzalo Salgueiro
>                           Colin Perkins
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc7983bis-03.txt
> 	Pages           : 8
> 	Date            : 2022-05-11
>
> Abstract:
>    This document defines how QUIC, Datagram Transport Layer Security
>    (DTLS), Real-time Transport Protocol (RTP), RTP Control Protocol
>    (RTCP), Session Traversal Utilities for NAT (STUN), Traversal Using
>    Relays around NAT (TURN), and ZRTP packets are multiplexed on a
>    single receiving socket.
>
>    This document updates RFC 7983 and RFC 5764.
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc7983bis/
>
> There is also an htmlized version available at:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc7983bis-03
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc7983bis-03
>
>
> Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at rsync.ietf.org::internet-drafts
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