Re: [AVTCORE] WGLC on draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-multi-stream-optimisation-06 - my comments

"Roni Even" <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> Fri, 25 September 2015 16:24 UTC

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Subject: Re: [AVTCORE] WGLC on draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-multi-stream-optimisation-06 - my comments
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Hi,

The document looks OK

Some comments and nits

 

1.       In section 1 "Consider a session  comprising ten participants, each
sending three media streams with  their own SSRC.  There will be 30 SSRCs in
such an RTP session, and
   30 RTCP reception reports will be sent per reporting interval as each
SSRC reports on all the others." Are there 30 RTCP reception reports or 270
if all 10 see all the session?  

2.       Section 3.2.1 third paragraph "even if the some or" should be "even
if some or"

3.       In section 3.3 replace chose with choose

 

 

Roni Even as individual

 

 

 

 

 

 

From: Roni Even [mailto:ron.even.tlv@gmail.com] 
Sent: Thursday, August 06, 2015 10:51 AM
To: avt@ietf.org
Subject: WGLC on draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-multi-stream-optimisation-06

 

Hi,

 

The chairs would like to start a 5 week WGLC for
draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-multi-stream-optimisation-06
<https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-multi-stream-optimisatio
n-06>  .  The longer WGLC is due to summer vacation and having a WGLC on
three documents

 

Please post your review comments, including an indication as to whether you
believe the document is ready to progress, no later than Thursday, September
10th.

 

Thanks,

Roni Even 

AVTcore co-chair

 

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