[AVTCORE] AD Evaluation of draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-multi-stream-09

["Ben Campbell" <[e-mail]>]

Hi,

Here is my AD evaluation of draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-multi-stream-09:

Thanks!

Ben.


Substantive Comments:
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- 3.3, last paragraph: "The endpoint MUST keep its total media sending 
rate within
    this share."

Does that need to be a 2119 "MUST"? Does it create a new normative 
requirement, or restate an existing requirement?

- 5: " ... the specification MUST be interpreted as each SSRC counting 
as a separate participant ..."

Does that really need to be a 2119 MUST? If so, please consider avoiding 
a word so open to interpretation as "interpreted".

- 5.2, Note: "... based on an TCP initial window of 4 packets, not the 
larger TCP initial windows..."

I assume this means that you borrowed the window size from tcp, not that 
this mechanism actually uses or requires tcp, right? “Based on TCP” 
is a bit confusing.


Editorial Comments:
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-3.3, last paragraph:

s/"to be generating" / "to generate"

- 5.3.2, last paragraph:

singular/plural mismatch between "investigations" and "has".

- 6.1, 2nd paragraph:

First sentence seems redundant to the previous paragraph.

- 6.2, 1st paragraph:

s/"...SSRCs are removed ..."/"... SSRCs be removed ..."