Re: [AVT] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-avt-text-red-02.txt

Hi Paul,

When I reviewed for the WG last call I found a few minor issues which 
will need to be corrected in an update after the WG last call. However 
they where so minor that I don't see how they affect the WG last call.

Also my comments does not count to the at least one reviewer rule. It is 
the task of the author to ensure that at least one person do a review.

Comments:

1. First page, left side of the header: It should read "Network Working 
Group" of historic reasons rather than "AVT Working Group".

2. In the "status of this memo" I don't think the intention is for the 
author to remove the "(we)" that are part of the boilerplate text, even 
when you are a single person. It is more important that it is the right 
text, than correctly correspond to if there is a single or more 
authors/contributors.

3. The RFC editor note should be moved to somewhere after the abstract.

Cheers

Magnus

Magnus Westerlund wrote:

> This is to announce a working group last call on the "Registration of 
> the text/red MIME Sub-Type" (draft-ietf-avt-text-red-02.txt).
> http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-avt-text-red-02.txt
> 
> Please send any final comments on this draft to the mailing list by
> Thursday the 8th April 2004.
> At that time, we will consider if it is appropriate to request
> publication of this draft as a proposed standard RFC.
> 
> Note that this draft will not be advanced until we receive at least one
> valid review from someone not directly involved with production of the
> draft (i.e., not an author or a major contributor).
> 
> Regards
> 
> Magnus Westerlund
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