Re: [AVTCORE] Comments on draft-ietf-avtcore-monarch-01

[Magnus Westerlund <[e-mail]>]

On 2011-05-17 08:47, Glen Zorn wrote:
> Section 10 says "Geoff Hunt and Philip Arden wrote the initial draft for
> this document".  That being the case, they should be listed as authors
> or, at the very least, in a "Contributors" section; I much prefer the
> former, since there is no lack of space on the front page.  In that same
> vein, I think that Qin Wu should be listed as "Editor".

I agree that they need to be duly credited. However, unless they are at
least somewhat active and willing to respond to some emails at least in
the RFC-editor phase they need to be in the contributor section.
Otherwise they are holding up the process and forces us and the AD to do
extra process.

> 
> Also in Section 10:
> s/Acknowledgement/Acknowledgments/
> s/Drage,Dan/Drage, Dan/
> s/Begen, Roni/Begen and Roni/
> s/early version/early versions/
> 


Cheers

Magnus Westerlund

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