Re: [AVT] I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-avt-rtp-clearmode-01.txt

On Tuesday, Sep 2, 2003, at 17:58 Europe/London, 
Internet-Drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts 
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Audio/Video Transport Working Group 
> of the IETF.
>
> 	Title		: RTP payload format for a 64 kbit/s transparent call
> 	Author(s)	: R. Kreuter
> 	Filename	: draft-ietf-avt-rtp-clearmode-01.txt
> 	Pages		: 7
> 	Date		: 2003-9-2
> 	
> This document describes how to carry 64 kbit/s data streams
> transparently in RTP packets, using a pseudo-codec called
> 'Clearmode'.  It also serves as registration for a related MIME type
> called 'audio/clearmode'.
> 'Clearmode' is a basic feature of VoIP media gateways. ture of VoIP 
> media gateways.
>
> A URL for this Internet-Draft is:
> http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-avt-rtp-clearmode-01.txt

A very short draft, so not much to comment upon:

  - The "Conventions used in this document" section should be a numbered
    section, just after the Introduction.

  - In Section 2, it states "There is no restriction on the number of 
samples
    per packet". There is actually a 64k limit imposed by IP, and you 
SHOULD
    choose the number of samples to be less than the path MTU.

  - An "IANA Considerations" section is needed. It may be simplest to 
rename
    Section 3.

  - The Security Considerations part of Section 3 should say "See 
Section 5
    of RFC XXXX". An RFC Editor note should be added to the start of the 
draft
    indicating that "All references to RFC XXXX should be replaced be 
the RFC
    number of this draft, when published". Also in Section 3, the 
"Published
    Specification" should reference RFC XXXX.

Aside from these minor points, it looks reasonable.

Cheers,
Colin

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