Re: [AVTCORE] draft-ietf-avt-srtp-not-mandatory-13 review

Hi,

Thanks for the comments. I'm about to submit the -14 version to address these.

Colin

On 11 Oct 2013, at 10:51, John Mattsson <john.mattsson@ericsson.com> wrote:

> Hi,
> 
> I reviewed draft-ietf-avt-srtp-not-mandatory-13. Sorry for missing WGLC.
> 
> I think it looks very good and I only have a few minor editorial comments:
> 
> - Choose either: 
> "RTP Control Protocol" or "RTP control protocol"
> "RTP Payload Format" or "RTP payload format"
> "RTP Profiles" or "RTP profiles"
> 
> - [p2] "Source-specific multicast (SSM)" and "multipoint conference unit (MCU)"
> First letters should probably be capitalized in all or none of the abbreviations c.f. "Real-time Transport Protocol (RTP)" and "Secure RTP (SRTP)"
> 
> - [p2] semicolon at the end of first bullet (telephony;), but not at the end of any other bullet.
> 
> - [p2] "Any Source Multicast video (ASM) conferencing" -> "Any Source Multicast (ASM) video conferencing"
> 
> - [p6] "and it's associated" -> "and its associated"
> 
> - [p6] "that are can be independent" -> "are" or "can be"
> 
> /John
> 
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