Re: [AVTCORE] I-D Action: draft-ietf-avtext-framemarking-08.txt

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Hi,

I have reviewed the changes and have some comments below. Otherwise
thanks for addressing my comments.

1. Section 3.1:

Note that this SHOULD match the RTP header
      marker bit when the latter is reliable.

So, should this really be a capital SHOULD? First it appears to be an
informative note. Secondly, video payload formats has so far used the
marker bit to indicate last packet of a frame/field (for interleaved).
But, that doesn't preclude that a future format would depart from the
convention. Thus, some rewording may be suitable.

2. Section 3.2

One issue was not resolved from my previous comment:

The ID is assigned per [RFC8285],
   and the length is encoded as L=2 which indicates 3 octets of data.

    0                   1                   2                   3
    0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1
   +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+
   |  ID=? |  L=2  |S|E|I|D|B| TID |   LID         |    TL0PICIDX  |
   +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+

   o  LID: Layer ID (8 bits) - Identifies the spatial and quality layer
      encoded, starting with 0 and increasing with higher fidelity.  If
      no scalability is used, this MUST be 0 or omitted to reduce
      length.  When omitted, TL0PICIDX MUST also be omitted.

The issue I see with the LID text is that they it says that the LID
field and the TL0PICIDX can be omitted, and thus have a shorter header.
To allow for this, one need to change the upper part for the long header
and the allowed values for the L field can be either 0 or 2.

Cheers

Magnus


On 2018-10-24 02:19, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Audio/Video Transport Core Maintenance WG of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : Frame Marking RTP Header Extension
>         Authors         : Mo Zanaty
>                           Espen Berger
>                           Suhas Nandakumar
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-avtext-framemarking-08.txt
> 	Pages           : 12
> 	Date            : 2018-10-23
>
> Abstract:
>    This document describes a Frame Marking RTP header extension used to
>    convey information about video frames that is critical for error
>    recovery and packet forwarding in RTP middleboxes or network nodes.
>    It is most useful when media is encrypted, and essential when the
>    middlebox or node has no access to the media decryption keys.  It is
>    also useful for codec-agnostic processing of encrypted or unencrypted
>    media, while it also supports extensions for codec-specific
>    information.
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-avtext-framemarking/
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