Re: [AVTCORE] Technical - Re: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7273 (4450)

[Kevin Gross <[e-mail]>]

Looks good. Thanks!

Kevin Gross - AVA Networks

On Wed, Apr 13, 2016 at 3:17 PM, Ben Campbell <[e-mail]> wrote:

> I made the edits, but have not yet verified it. Please double check that
> the edits are correct, then I will verify.
>
> Thanks!
>
> Ben.
>
>
> On 4 Apr 2016, at 13:27, Magnus Westerlund wrote:
>
> Ben,
>>
>> Can you please update the Errata with the below original and edited text.
>> This has been available on the list for quite some time so I suggest that
>> you verify it after editing it.
>>
>>
>> Section 4.8:
>>
>> Original Text
>> -------------
>>    ; PTP domain allowed characters: 0x21-0x7E (IEEE 1588-2002)
>>    ptp-domain-name = "domain-name=" 1*16ptp-domain-char
>>    ptp-domain-char = %x21-7E
>>
>>    ; PTP domain allowed number range: 0-127 (IEEE 1588-2008)
>>    ptp-domain-nmbr = "domain-nmbr=" ptp-domain-dgts
>>    ptp-domain-dgts = ptp-domain-n1 / ptp-domain-n2 / ptp-domain-n3
>>    ptp-domain-n1   = DIGIT             ; 0-9
>>    ptp-domain-n2   = POS-DIGIT DIGIT   ; 10-99
>>    ptp-domain-n3   = ("10"/"11") DIGIT ; 100-119
>>                    / "12" %x30-37      ; 120-127
>>
>> Corrected Text
>> --------------
>>    ; PTP domain allowed characters: 0x21-0x7E (IEEE 1588-2002)
>>    ptp-domain-name = 1*16ptp-domain-char
>>    ptp-domain-char = %x21-7E
>>
>>    ; PTP domain allowed number range: 0-127 (IEEE 1588-2008)
>>    ptp-domain-nmbr = ptp-domain-dgts
>>    ptp-domain-dgts = ptp-domain-n1 / ptp-domain-n2 / ptp-domain-n3
>>    ptp-domain-n1   = DIGIT             ; 0-9
>>    ptp-domain-n2   = POS-DIGIT DIGIT   ; 10-99
>>    ptp-domain-n3   = ("10"/"11") DIGIT ; 100-119
>>                    / "12" %x30-37      ; 120-127
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
>> The Note should also be updated:
>>
>> There is an inconsistency between ABNF in section 4.8 and examples in
>> section 5.5. Due to evidence, that current implementations are working to
>> what is shown in the examples, this is resolved by updating the ABNF
>> specification.
>>
>> cheers
>>
>> Magnus
>>
>>
>> Den 2016-01-19 kl. 23:16, skrev Kevin Gross:
>>
>>> The authors are in agreement that the most recent proposal is the
>>> desired fix and there doesn't seem to be any dissent in AVTCORE about
>>> it. Can we get the errata updated to reflect this most recent proposal?
>>> It is still showing my original report -
>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=7273
>>>
>>> Kevin Gross - AVA Networks
>>>
>>> On Sun, Dec 6, 2015 at 1:00 PM, Kevin Gross <[e-mail]
>>> <mailto:[e-mail]>> wrote:
>>>
>>>     The authors and I propose the following fix for the reported RFC
>>>     7273 errata. These ABNF changes bring the ABNF specification into
>>>     agreement with the examples in the RFC. Current RFC 7273
>>>     implementations have been based on the examples.
>>>
>>>     Original Text
>>>     -------------
>>>         ; PTP domain allowed characters: 0x21-0x7E (IEEE 1588-2002)
>>>         ptp-domain-name = "domain-name=" 1*16ptp-domain-char
>>>         ptp-domain-char = %x21-7E
>>>
>>>         ; PTP domain allowed number range: 0-127 (IEEE 1588-2008)
>>>         ptp-domain-nmbr = "domain-nmbr=" ptp-domain-dgts
>>>         ptp-domain-dgts = ptp-domain-n1 / ptp-domain-n2 / ptp-domain-n3
>>>         ptp-domain-n1   = DIGIT             ; 0-9
>>>         ptp-domain-n2   = POS-DIGIT DIGIT   ; 10-99
>>>         ptp-domain-n3   = ("10"/"11") DIGIT ; 100-119
>>>                         / "12" %x30-37      ; 120-127
>>>
>>>     Corrected Text
>>>     --------------
>>>         ; PTP domain allowed characters: 0x21-0x7E (IEEE 1588-2002)
>>>         ptp-domain-name = 1*16ptp-domain-char
>>>         ptp-domain-char = %x21-7E
>>>
>>>         ; PTP domain allowed number range: 0-127 (IEEE 1588-2008)
>>>         ptp-domain-nmbr = ptp-domain-dgts
>>>         ptp-domain-dgts = ptp-domain-n1 / ptp-domain-n2 / ptp-domain-n3
>>>         ptp-domain-n1   = DIGIT             ; 0-9
>>>         ptp-domain-n2   = POS-DIGIT DIGIT   ; 10-99
>>>         ptp-domain-n3   = ("10"/"11") DIGIT ; 100-119
>>>                         / "12" %x30-37      ; 120-127
>>>
>>>
>>>     Kevin Gross - AVA Networks
>>>
>>>     On Thu, Oct 8, 2015 at 12:37 PM, Kevin Gross <[e-mail]
>>>     <mailto:[e-mail]>> wrote:
>>>
>>>         Yes, I will take your discussion into account when proposing
>>>         final ABNF changes. I wanted first to make sure there were no
>>>         objection to the general proposal of fixing this by conforming
>>>         ABNF to examples. Since we have seen no objections, I will
>>>         proceed to prepare a revision.
>>>
>>>         Kevin Gross - AVA Networks
>>>
>>>         On Tue, Oct 6, 2015 at 3:33 AM, Magnus Westerlund
>>>         <[e-mail]
>>>         <mailto:[e-mail]>> wrote:
>>>
>>>             Hi Kevin,
>>>
>>>             Can you please review my previous email in detail:
>>>
>>> https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/avt/kjoyUZh-9c4lYMM6pXQhH30TebY
>>>
>>>             I think you need to confirm on what changes that is really
>>>             proposed here, and thus my feedback is relevant for this.
>>>
>>>             However, I have so far seen no one objecting to the general
>>>             intention to at least make alignment with the examples?
>>>
>>>             Cheers
>>>
>>>             Magnus Westerlund
>>>             (AVTCORE chair)
>>>
>>>
>>>             --
>>>
>>>             Magnus Westerlund
>>>
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>>
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