[AVTCORE] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-avtcore-cc-feedback-message-08: (with COMMENT)

Erik Kline via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Sun, 20 September 2020 02:58 UTC

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[[ questions ]]

[ section 3.1 ]

* If L=0, do we need text about how to treat report entries with
  non-zero ECN and ATO fields?

  Separately, what's a good mnemonic for "L"?  My instinct was to treat it
  as the "Loss" bit, but with the meaning the values 0 and 1 reversed that
  doesn't actually work very well.


[[ nits ]]

[ section 1 ]

* "to have generic...format" -> "to have a generic...format", perhaps

[ section 3.1 ]

* "sent previous reports" -> "previous reports sent", perhaps?

[ section 7 ]

* "a=ecn-capaable-rtp:" -> "a=ecn-capable-rtp:"

[ section 8 ]

* "ECN marking marking information" -> "ECN marking information"