Re: [AVTCORE] Fwd: Technical - Re: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7273 (4450)

Kevin Gross <kevin.gross@avanw.com> Sun, 06 December 2015 20:02 UTC

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Subject: Re: [AVTCORE] Fwd: Technical - Re: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7273 (4450)
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The authors and I propose the following fix for the reported RFC 7273
errata. These ABNF changes bring the ABNF specification into agreement with
the examples in the RFC. Current RFC 7273 implementations have been based
on the examples.

Original Text
-------------
   ; PTP domain allowed characters: 0x21-0x7E (IEEE 1588-2002)
   ptp-domain-name = "domain-name=" 1*16ptp-domain-char
   ptp-domain-char = %x21-7E

   ; PTP domain allowed number range: 0-127 (IEEE 1588-2008)
   ptp-domain-nmbr = "domain-nmbr=" ptp-domain-dgts
   ptp-domain-dgts = ptp-domain-n1 / ptp-domain-n2 / ptp-domain-n3
   ptp-domain-n1   = DIGIT             ; 0-9
   ptp-domain-n2   = POS-DIGIT DIGIT   ; 10-99
   ptp-domain-n3   = ("10"/"11") DIGIT ; 100-119
                   / "12" %x30-37      ; 120-127

Corrected Text
--------------
   ; PTP domain allowed characters: 0x21-0x7E (IEEE 1588-2002)
   ptp-domain-name = 1*16ptp-domain-char
   ptp-domain-char = %x21-7E

   ; PTP domain allowed number range: 0-127 (IEEE 1588-2008)
   ptp-domain-nmbr = ptp-domain-dgts
   ptp-domain-dgts = ptp-domain-n1 / ptp-domain-n2 / ptp-domain-n3
   ptp-domain-n1   = DIGIT             ; 0-9
   ptp-domain-n2   = POS-DIGIT DIGIT   ; 10-99
   ptp-domain-n3   = ("10"/"11") DIGIT ; 100-119
                   / "12" %x30-37      ; 120-127


Kevin Gross - AVA Networks

On Thu, Oct 8, 2015 at 12:37 PM, Kevin Gross <kevin.gross@avanw.com> wrote:

> Yes, I will take your discussion into account when proposing final ABNF
> changes. I wanted first to make sure there were no objection to the general
> proposal of fixing this by conforming ABNF to examples. Since we have seen
> no objections, I will proceed to prepare a revision.
>
> Kevin Gross - AVA Networks
>
> On Tue, Oct 6, 2015 at 3:33 AM, Magnus Westerlund <
> magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com> wrote:
>
>> Hi Kevin,
>>
>> Can you please review my previous email in detail:
>> https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/avt/kjoyUZh-9c4lYMM6pXQhH30TebY
>>
>> I think you need to confirm on what changes that is really proposed here,
>> and thus my feedback is relevant for this.
>>
>> However, I have so far seen no one objecting to the general intention to
>> at least make alignment with the examples?
>>
>> Cheers
>>
>> Magnus Westerlund
>> (AVTCORE chair)
>>
>>
>> --
>>
>> Magnus Westerlund
>>
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