Re: [AVTCORE] Review of draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc5764-mux-fixes-02

Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu> Tue, 26 January 2016 21:41 UTC

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On 1/26/16 3:26 PM, Marc Petit-Huguenin wrote:

> After more discussions between authors, we decided to remove the section about ordering altogether.  We now think that even if the proposal is not as future-proof as possible, it is good enough.

This works better for me. Thanks!

A few comments on -04:

* Section 5 (Terminology):

This is now section 5. That seems wrong. The document will read better 
if you make it section 2.

* Section 6 (RFC5764 Updates):

The new text still has some remnants of the ordering. In particular: 
"Then if ... Then if ... Then if ... Else if ...".

I suggest changing this to "If ... If ... If ... If ...".

Otherwise I'm happy.

	Thanks,
	Paul