Re: [AVTCORE] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC6679 (3586)

Gonzalo Camarillo <Gonzalo.Camarillo@ericsson.com> Thu, 18 April 2013 06:27 UTC

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Date: Thu, 18 Apr 2013 09:27:29 +0300
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Subject: Re: [AVTCORE] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC6679 (3586)
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Hi Magnus,

yes, I agree it is important. I have just verified it.

Cheers,

Gonzalo

On 16/04/2013 11:45 AM, Magnus Westerlund wrote:
> On 2013-04-11 14:04, Gonzalo Camarillo wrote:
>> Hi,
>>
>> would anybody object to put this erratum into the "held for document
>> update" status?
> 
> I am okay with held for document update, although I would prefer
> verified as I think it is an important, but editorial errata.
> 
> Cheers
> 
> Magnus
> 
>>
>> Cheers,
>>
>> Gonzalo
>>
>> On 10/04/2013 4:12 PM, RFC Errata System wrote:
>>> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC6679,
>>> "Explicit Congestion Notification (ECN) for RTP over UDP".
>>>
>>> --------------------------------------
>>> You may review the report below and at:
>>> http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=6679&eid=3586
>>>
>>> --------------------------------------
>>> Type: Editorial
>>> Reported by: Magnus Westerlund <magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com>
>>>
>>> Section: 12.1
>>>
>>> Original Text
>>> -------------
>>>    The Offer:
>>>
>>> ...
>>>       a=ecn-capable-rtp: ice rtp ect=0 mode=setread
>>> ...
>>>
>>>    The Answer:
>>> ...
>>>       a=ecn-capable-rtp: ice ect=0 mode=readonly
>>> ...
>>>
>>> Corrected Text
>>> --------------
>>>    The Offer:
>>>
>>> ...
>>>       a=ecn-capable-rtp: ice,rtp ect=0; mode=setread
>>> ...
>>>
>>>    The Answer:
>>> ...
>>>       a=ecn-capable-rtp: ice ect=0; mode=readonly
>>> ...
>>>
>>> Notes
>>> -----
>>> The examples does not match the ABNF rules for the a=ecn-capaable-rtp attribute. Two issues are present, first the init method list must be comma separated with no spaces, secondly any additional parameters shall be semi colon plus space separated. Therefore both a=ecn-capable-rtp lines have been corrected. 
>>>
>>> This is primarily an editorial issues but people needs to aware of the errors in the example.
>>>
>>> Instructions:
>>> -------------
>>> This errata is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please
>>> use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or
>>> rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party (IESG)
>>> can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary. 
>>>
>>> --------------------------------------
>>> RFC6679 (draft-ietf-avtcore-ecn-for-rtp-08)
>>> --------------------------------------
>>> Title               : Explicit Congestion Notification (ECN) for RTP over UDP
>>> Publication Date    : August 2012
>>> Author(s)           : M. Westerlund, I. Johansson, C. Perkins, P. O'Hanlon, K. Carlberg
>>> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
>>> Source              : Audio/Video Transport Core Maintenance
>>> Area                : Real-time Applications and Infrastructure
>>> Stream              : IETF
>>> Verifying Party     : IESG
>>>
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